Monday, August 9, 2010

draft of essay!!!!

thesis statement : There are many benefit of taking breakfast in the morning.
topic sentence : Enhance concentration and performance in school or work.
  • Brain needs glucose from food in order to work well.
  • Body and minds need essential nutrients to promote allertness, stamina and improve performance.
  • Increase metabolism rate in body and giving energy to engage any physical activity
topic sentence : Tend to less fall sick.
  • Body is energetic, stronger and more immune production to prevent disease and infections.
  • Helps prevent from insulin resistance and avoid from develop diabetes mellitus.
  • Prevent morning platelet activation that associated with heart attack.
topic sentence : Weight control
  • Reduce hunger throughout day because adequate balance of nutrients and mineral in body.
  • Help people make better choice at other meals and balancing calories with exercise.
  • prevent to take more meals during lunch.
conclusion : There are many benefits of taking breakfast. So, make a breakfast as compulsory meal to start a good day.

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